Then, post the notes as a comment on this blog.
That way,
- you will have a record of it to help you in your shooting and editing
- your mentors will have a record to use as they assist in your training
- and mrs s will have a set of standards with which to grade your package!
Be sure to include your name and your partner's name in the notes.
This is DUE ON November 16, TODAY.
Remember: "Show me something I can't see; take me somewhere I can't go..."
and remember: SCCS (sucks...)
Good luck and good stories!
mrs s
4 comments:
Daphne-Jayne&Raena
Hot seat Notes:
"Fiah Clothing"
-open up a store
-Sponsers a break dancing Crew
-How they came up with the design has a story behind it.
Suggestions:
Come up with a deeper story
Do more research
Have a main focus
After doing research we found another story.
"Tucker the Dog"
A dog, that helps heal patients.
Keep them company, make them happy. This Dog works at the Kapiolani Medical Center. Helps children and woman.
Notes
-Make sure you ask for permission from the hopital.
- Since it involves medical patients it might me a restricted.
Cynthia&Raena
Hot Seat notes on the "FLu shots at Queen's hospital":
-Hard to get any information on interview people because of privacy.
-Hard to get any permission in general because of the paitents and their medical privacy
-hard broll and interviews.
suggestions:
Glen Wakai can ask a school that is getting flu shots for us to do a story.
After doing research we found another story: Storto's in kaimuki; A famous and popular sandwhich eatery!
We already got permission to shoot a story their!
Niki & Andrew
Hot Seat Notes:
"Taylor Kim"
-Diabetes
-Age 9
-Tae Kwon Do
-Her stuggles
Suggestions:
-B-roll
-What will the views do?
Facts:
Total: 23.6 million children and adults in the United States-- 7.8% of the population -- have diabetes.
Diagnosed: 17.9 million people
Undiagnosed: 5.7 million people
Pre-diabetes: 57 million people
New Cases: 1.6 million new cases of diabetes are diagnosed in people aged 20 years and older each year.
Under 20 years of age
186,300, or 0.22% of all people in this age group have diabetes
About one in every 400 to 600 children and adolescents has type 1 diabetes
2 million adolescents (or 1 in 6 overweight adolescents) aged 12-19 have pre-diabetes
Kelly & Dary:
Hot Seat Notes:
-wrestlling/boxing underground club
-won a championship
-going to schools to recruit
Suggestions:
"find a better story"
"follow up on your story"
"reasearch other stories or research on your story"
We found a new story:
"Honolulu Hale"
A tree that has been around for generations is being cut down from a beloved church. It is to be presented in the yearly Honolulu Hale City Lights.
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